Slide 1 – Lesson Menu
Strengths
· Lettering style
The fonts used for the heading and the main text include ADEPT, Tempus Sans ITC and Times New Roman. These are of the serif style (Times New Roman) or sans serif style (ADEPT and Tempus Sans ITC), which are legible and easy to read.
· Use of capital letters
The title of the slide consists of only two words and the words are in both upper and lower case. This makes it easy and comfortable to read.
· Lettering colour
The background is beige (or grey?) in colour, which is a light colour while the font colours used are black, brown and red, which are all contrasting with the background. Hence, it is easy to read the words.
· Lettering size
The minimum font size used is 24. Hence, when the slides are projected to the screen in front of a class, it is possible for students sitting at the back of the classroom to read it. However, I think with the amount of empty space available, the creator can afford to increase the font size by a little bit more.
· Number of lines
A total of 5 lines in the main text are observed. This is kept within the limit of not more than 8 lines.
· Audio – Narration
The narration is quite clear. It may provide some help for students who are too young to read, although I think that the written instructions are already sufficient.
Areas of improvement
· Number of lettering styles
A total of three types of font, namely ADEPT, Tempus Sans ITC and Times New Roman, is used. It would have been better if the creator of the slides sticks to not more than two types of font. In addition, I feel that Tempus Sans ITC is a more ‘informal’ font compared to Times New Roman. Hence, the two font types do not really harmonize each other very well.
· Spacing between lines
The spacing between the lines is too close at the part where we are supposed to click the icons to hear some frog sounds. Since there is a lot of empty space within the slide, the creator should try to maintain at least a one-and-a-half spacing in between the lines. The spacing between the lines is too far away between the line “Life Cycle of the Frog” and the line “Click on the buttons learn more!”. Since the latter is an instruction pertaining to the two bullet points above, it should be closer to the two points. If not, it will create a disjoint feeling and readers might not realize that what that line is referring to.
· Static visual display
I do not see the need of adding a picture of the frog right next to the icons, assuming that the target audience is primary school students who already know how a frog looks like. It might be better if some descriptions of the audio clips are provided so that the audience knows what to expect before they hear the clips. This is to prepare them in advance.
· Audio – Music
I feel that the music does provide a relaxing learning environment only if the slides are meant for students to do some self-paced learning at home. However, for a normal lesson, I think it can be quite distracting.
· Audio – Sound effects
The sound of the frog might make the lesson more interesting. However, I do not see any relevance of the frog sounds to the lesson objectives. On top of that, it should have a replay feature so that students who cannot hear it clearly the first time can replay it at ease. The icons did not work for me and therefore, I cannot comment on the audio quality.
· Use of colour
The background is of a light colour. As a result, the green frog is actually very eye-catching. Since the frog is not the main focus of the slide, I feel that it might be better to remove that picture.
· Layout
The layout gives me a feeling of imbalance. I feel that the creator has not made full use of the available space and as a result, the slide looks empty to me.
Slide 2 – FACTS ABOUT FROGS
Strengths
· Use of capital letters
The title of the slide consists of only three words. Although the words are all in upper case, these can still be read easily.
· Lettering colour
The background is beige in colour, which is a light colour while the font colours used are black, which is contrasting with the background. Hence, it is easy to read the words.
· Layout
The layout gives me a feeling of balance although the text and the graphic are not really related. At least, there is a pattern in which the elements are arranged. It will be better if the bullet points on the top right hand portion (the same goes for the bullet points on the bottom left portion) are aligned. Right now, the point below is indented and this actually gives reader an impression that the second point is a sub-point of the first point.
Areas of improvement
· Lettering style
The fonts used for the heading and the main text include Arial Black and Arial. These are of sans serif style, which are legible and easy to read. However, the fonts used are inconsistent with the fonts used in previous slides. It will be better if the creator standardize the font type for all the headings and all the main text.
· Lettering colour
If the creator really wants to emphasize the word ‘Amphibians’, I think other than bolding the word, he or she should choose another font colour, perhaps red, to ensure that it will stand out.
· Lettering size
The minimum font size used is 12. Hence, when the slides are projected to the screen in front of a class, students who are sitting at the back might not be able to read it.
· Spacing between lines
The spacing between the lines is too close and the lines will blur out at a distance.
· Number of lines
A total of 9 lines in the main text are observed. This should be kept within the limit of not more than 8 lines.
· Static visual display
Since this slide covers the physical features of a frog, I think it will be more useful if certain parts of the frog such as the feet and back legs are shown as ‘zoomed-in version’s to illustrate the points.
· Transitional effects
I feel that there is a misuse of text animation in this slide. The fact that the words appear one by one with accompanying sound effects can be quite irritating and distracting. It will be much better if the text appear point by point per clicking.
Slide 3 – The Life Cycle of a Frog
Strengths
· Lettering style
The fonts style used for the heading and the main text are Arial Black and Time New Roman. These are of the serif style (Times New Roman) or sans serif style (Arial Black), which are legible and easy to read.
· Lettering colour
The background is beige in colour, which is a light colour while the font colours used are black and orange, which is contrasting with the background. Hence, it is easy to read the words. This time round, the word, STAGE, which the creator wants to emphasize is not only in bold and in upper case, it is also in orange. Hence, the purpose is achieved.
· Number of lines
The number of lines is kept within the limit of not more than 8 lines.
· Layout
A circle is used to depict the life cycle of a frog. Hence, balance is achieved.
Areas of improvement
· Use of capital letters
The instruction is a long sentence of more than six words and the words are all in upper case. Hence, this will slow down reading speed.
· Lettering size
The minimum font size used is 16. Some of the words might be too small to be seen when projected onto the screen.
· Spacing between lines
The spacing between the lines is too close and the lines will blur out at a distance, especially since the words are all in upper case.
· Static visual display
The picture is a bit blur. It will be better if a higher resolution picture has been used instead.
Slide 4 – Eggs
Strengths
· Lettering style
The fonts used for the heading and the main text include Arial Black and Arial. These are of sans serif style, which are legible and easy to read.
· Use of capital letters
The title of the slide consists of only one word and it is in both upper and lower case. This ensures easy reading.
· Number of lines
The number of lines is kept within the limit of not more than 8 lines.
Areas of improvement
· Lettering size
The minimum font size used is 16. Some of the words might be too small to be seen when projected onto the screen.
· Spacing between lines
The spacing between the lines is too close and the lines will blur out at a distance.
· Dynamic visual display
Since this slide covers part of eggs, the picture of the frog eating the fly is irrelevant. It will be more relevant if this picture is placed in Slide 2 instead. Besides, the gif file keeps repeating the same action and this can be rather distracting.
· Transitional effects
I feel that there is a misuse of text animation in this slide. The fact that the words appear one by one is still quite irritating and distracting even though the sound effect is absent for this slide. It will be much better if the text appear point by point per clicking.
· Layout
The layout gives me a feeling of imbalance as the text and the picture are not aligned together. This makes the slide looks messy, especially the part where the picture of eggs and the title is sort of ‘forced’ together. It will be better if the size of the picture is reduced. The two bullet points should be aligned together too.
Slide 5 – Tadpole
Strengths
· Lettering style
The fonts used for the heading and the main text include Arial Black and Arial. These are of sans serif style, which are legible and easy to read.
· Use of capital letters
The title of the slide consists of only one word and it is in both upper and lower case. This ensures easy reading.
· Static visual display
The pictures are relevant to the content and hence, it supports learning. Besides, the pictures are quite clear too.
· Transitional effects
The text appears point by point per clicking. This is less distracting than previous slide. The teacher is able to reveal the next point after explaining the first point, thus directing students’ attention to the right place.
· Layout
The pictures and the text are aligned in informal balance. This makes it comfortable for viewing. The three bullet points are aligned too, which looks neater than the previous slide.
Areas of improvement
· Lettering size
The minimum font size used is 18. The words might be too small to be read when projected onto the screen.
· Spacing between lines
The spacing between the lines is too close and the lines will blur out at a distance.
· Number of lines
A total of 13 lines are observed, which exceeds the limit of not more than 8 lines. The creator should create another slide instead.
· Others
The creator should use Arabic number to show numbers pertaining to time and duration for easy reading.
Slide 6 – Young Frog
Strengths
· Lettering style
The fonts used for the heading and the main text include Arial Black and Arial. These are of sans serif style, which are legible and easy to read.
· Use of capital letters
The title of the slide consists of only two words and these are in both upper and lower case. This ensures easy reading.
· Static visual display
The pictures are relevant to the content and hence, it supports learning. Besides, the pictures are quite clear too.
· Layout
The pictures and the text are aligned in informal balance. This makes it comfortable for viewing.
Areas of improvement
· Lettering size
The minimum font size used is 16. The words might be too small to be read when projected onto the screen.
· Number of lines
A total of 10 lines are observed, which exceeds the limit of not more than 8 lines. The creator should create another slide instead.
· Spacing between lines
The spacing between the lines is too close and the lines will blur out at a distance.
· Transitional effects
The words appear one by one, which is still quite irritating and distracting even though the sound effect is absent for this slide. It will be much better if the text appear point by point per clicking.
· Others
The creator should use Arabic number to show numbers pertaining to time and duration for easy reading.